Six Sentence Sunday

Judi leaned back against the tarped car and watched him work.

“Don’t touch that.” Bryce pointed at her, but didn’t look up.

Judi stood up straight. “What’s under here?” She tugged at the cover and glimpsed a sliver of gray primer
paint. “Are you restoring a car?”

From Sucker for a Hot Rod.

Six Sentence Sunday

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15 comments

  1. Oh! Judi sounds like she knows what she's talking about. I like that he tells her not to touch it..and she does it anyway. So looking forward to reading this. It's killing me! (Narration done in two more weeks.) Great six!

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  2. I just got a Kindle and this book is on my gotta buy list!

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  3. Nice snippet! Hope we get to find out what he's working on soon.

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  4. Whats under there??

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  5. Nice flow to it, Joselyn. Great six

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  7. You'd think guys would know "don't touch that" is galspeak for "look under here."

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  8. Seriously, how many of us listen when told 'Don't touch?' lol Great six!

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  9. Love the six.

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  10. The scene in My Cousin Vinny when Mona Lisa Vito is on the witness stand talking about the mint green 1963 Pontiac Tempest suddenly popped into my head. LOL!

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  11. Realistic dialog. I like how she ignored him and looked under the tarp anyhow. Keep 'em coming!

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  12. oh, wonder what he's hiding. Intriguing indeed.

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  13. good insight into a head strong character. Tell her not to touch and she does. She's going to be a handful

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  14. A woman that knows about cars is not going to be a pushover! Love it!

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