Six Sentence Sunday

From my work in progress Locations of the Heart:

Rachel arrived at their table and flipped their sturdy brown coffee mugs over.  “Just decaf today, ladies, or half and half?” She held the orange-rimmed carafe poised over Minnie’s cup.
“It’s a half and half day,” Edith said.  “Any day that Gordon Anderson is in town requires a dose of caffeine.”
Minnie snorted. “It requires Jack Daniels, but it’s a little too early in the day.”

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Sucker for a Hot Rod is now available in trade paperback from CreateSpace.
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10 comments

  1. lol! What a man!!

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  2. Oooo!!! Love that! ahah go for the Jack anyway!

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  3. Nice dialogue! Sometimes coffee just won't cut it 🙂

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  4. Make it Irish ;)Great little snippet of dialogue.

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  5. If it's afternoon then Jack would be perfect. Of course it's afternoon someplace in the world

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  6. Ok, so I want to know what's with Gordon that he inspires alcohol? Will have to buy the book. Great six!

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  7. It requires Jack Daniels! What a great line! Terrific way to illustrate these characters and the absent Gordon!

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  8. I love your six! Thank you.

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  9. I like the humor. Sounds like a real conversation between friends too. Good job.

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  10. Hahaha! I really enjoyed this one 🙂 Could really visualize the scene.

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