Six Sentence Sunday

His fingers shook.
“Judi Montgomery, will you marry me?” He opened the box and a square cut diamond winked at her against the cushioned white satin.

“What?” She hadn’t meant to say it out loud, but it slipped out. This was a bit more than an oil filter.


From Sucker for a Hot Rod available from Astraea Press


Six Sentence Sunday.

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15 comments

  1. Just a bit more than an oil filter. 😉 Nice snippet.

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  2. Woot! Quite a bit more. 🙂 Fun six.

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  3. Love the last line!

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  4. You have totally hooked me! I love his nervousness and her response is stellar. Totally going on my TBR list.

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  5. I love this! Great last line!

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  6. Yes, it's a tad more than an oil change he's proposing. Great six!

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  7. Great last line.

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  8. LOL @ oil filter!Love the six, love the novel title 🙂

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  9. Nice six. Enjoyed it.

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  10. I love the contrast of oil filter and diamond ring in white satin. Very clever six.

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  11. Love the snippet. Wonder what she'd have said if it was an oil filter.

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  12. LOLLove that last line!

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  13. "What?" Anyone who hasn't yet picked this book up really ought to!

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  14. More than an oil filter…nice! Going to have to check this book out.Lori

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  15. LOL! Love her 'what?' Such an honest reaction. Very witty!

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