Twisting the elastic back into her hair, she snapped the compact shut and tossed it back in her purse. What did it matter how she looked? This wasn’t a date.
Then she remembered the outline of his pectoral muscles under that clingy t-shirt. She rooted around in her purse for her mascara and lipstick and snatched her compact. A little refresher wouldn’t hurt.
From Sucker for a Hot Rod, coming Tuesday from Astraea Press
lol great last line!
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a little refresher NEVER hurts lol.
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Nice job. Love the description and flow from her POV. I want to know what happens next. 🙂
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LOL Nicely done!
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Nice snippet. A refresher is always a good idea!
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Laff! I love it – so honest and real! Great job!
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LOL. I love it.
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BTW, I love the title, too.Carahttp://www.carabristol.com
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good job on showing her indecisiveness. when in doubt, refresh
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How cute! Hope it's as good as she's afraid to hope it'll be!
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It's always best to look our best! LOL. Great lines!
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lol! A little refresher! 😉
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Mmm, I'm liking the sound of these muscles 🙂
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